Valarie: Her posts were well-written, with a detailed recordings of what she ate at the various times throughout the 3 days. Her reflections also had a very clear analysis of what went wrong and what she did right throughout the project!;) The analysis was also good as she made good use of the nutritional tools.
Annabelle: Like Valarie, her posts were all well-written. Annabelle's diet was more balanced than mine and her todal dietary intake was much closer to the RDDA than mine. Her analysis also included her personal opinions on the results of the analysis so that made her posts interesting to read as well.
Shermaine: Her blog posts were well-elaborated in general but the presentation could have been a little better. It was a little hard to read the letters. It would have been much more enjoyable to read it if the font size were a little bigger and if the posts were more organized. But all in all, her blog was good!:)
Love,
Thiri:)
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